Six Words, 1

"Please?"
"Can't."
"Why?"
"Him."
"Eliminated..."
"What?!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Monteverdi Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 1:53 PM
I really, really like this one. You are incredibly talented
A  Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 2:00 AM
Well done... Luke..skat
Selfa Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Poetry in just 6 words Luke! Great Job! Congratulations! :) _HANS
Irwin Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 7:10 AM
Thanks so much
A. Sharma Avatar
February 25, 2016 at 1:20 AM
Congrats on ur awesome witty win Luke.
Gentry Avatar
February 24, 2016 at 12:48 PM
:) Congrats on your win!
A   Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 5:08 PM
Luke, Congrats on your "SIX WORD win." LINDA
Allison Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 4:57 PM
Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 3:56 PM
OH what a tale told with six words!!! Congrats.
Jameson Avatar
February 23, 2016 at 11:53 AM
Witty. A nice write, well done..congrats on your placement Luke.
Irwin Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 2:49 PM
Thanks. I wasn't entirely sure which direction it was going to go until it was done. It appears I have a predisposition to darkness.
Allison Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 2:16 PM
This is quite dark Luke good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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