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Six Baby Ducklings

six baby ducklings
sailing behind proud mother...
empty broken shells



seasonal--ducklings--spring

Written: 31/10/2011 Margaret A Linton Lassie

contest: strict haiku
sponsor: Charles Henderson

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/16/2011 11:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest Margaret. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/13/2011 9:54:00 AM Congrats on your winning work..Sara Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/12/2011 2:36:00 PM charming image! Congrad's Light & love Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 11/11/2011 11:50:00 AM Your last line here sure tied everything so well-- and I sure can imagine those duckling behind proud mama duck! Really charming! Super congrats on your win, Margaret :D Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/11/2011 10:34:00 AM Nice picture you have painted here Marg.Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 11/11/2011 7:50:00 AM Margaret, congratulations on your 3rd place win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/11/2011 1:12:00 AM M..~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/10/2011 8:24:00 PM Congrats Margaret on a terrific win for this spectacular Haiku luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/10/2011 8:16:00 PM Cute, very cute, marg!! I loved the picture you showed Congratulations. Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 11/10/2011 2:10:00 PM Margaret~Talk about an AH-HA! Those empty broken shells really AH'haaaad me. YOu wrote such a powerful haiku...I am just learning this form and when I saw the word "proud" I was wondering if that were an emotion an animal has....I am so excited to see this one place so high in such a competitive contest! High 5, girl! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Charles Henderson Date: 11/10/2011 1:18:00 PM Marg--thank you for entering my contest. What a super poem. A wonderful 3rd place. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/6/2011 6:53:00 AM Awww, what a sweet haiku. Many congrats on all your wins too, my friend : ) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/2/2011 9:05:00 PM Rereading this one: I love this and I hope it rates very high. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/2/2011 6:03:00 AM Wow looks like a winner Margaret. The best to you in the contest. Thank you for your always kind words on my writing. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 10/31/2011 6:51:00 AM this is a really cute entry for the contest, I like it a lot :-) Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 10/30/2011 11:00:00 PM Lovely one to visualize. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/30/2011 10:25:00 PM Very nice, margy. I need to hurry and do one of these. they are filling up fast!! Login to Reply