Get Your Premium Membership

six baby ducklings

six baby ducklings sailing behind proud mother... empty broken shells
seasonal--ducklings--spring Written: 31/10/2011 Margaret A Linton Lassie contest: strict haiku sponsor: Charles Henderson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/16/2011 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Strict Haiku contest Margaret. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 11/13/2011 9:54:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 11/12/2011 2:36:00 PM
charming image! Congrad's Light & love
Login to Reply
Date: 11/11/2011 11:50:00 AM
Your last line here sure tied everything so well-- and I sure can imagine those duckling behind proud mama duck! Really charming! Super congrats on your win, Margaret :D
Login to Reply
Date: 11/11/2011 10:34:00 AM
Nice picture you have painted here Marg.Congrats on your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/11/2011 7:50:00 AM
Margaret, congratulations on your 3rd place win with this wonderful Haiku. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Login to Reply
Date: 11/11/2011 1:12:00 AM
M..~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CHARLES STRICK HAIKU *YIKKEEESS~lesson~ , I COULD NEVER PULL THIS OFF* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2011 8:24:00 PM
Congrats Margaret on a terrific win for this spectacular Haiku luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2011 8:16:00 PM
Cute, very cute, marg!! I loved the picture you showed Congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2011 2:10:00 PM
Margaret~Talk about an AH-HA! Those empty broken shells really AH'haaaad me. YOu wrote such a powerful haiku...I am just learning this form and when I saw the word "proud" I was wondering if that were an emotion an animal has....I am so excited to see this one place so high in such a competitive contest! High 5, girl! Gwendolen
Login to Reply
Date: 11/10/2011 1:18:00 PM
Marg--thank you for entering my contest. What a super poem. A wonderful 3rd place.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/6/2011 6:53:00 AM
Awww, what a sweet haiku. Many congrats on all your wins too, my friend : )
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2011 9:05:00 PM
Rereading this one: I love this and I hope it rates very high.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/2/2011 6:03:00 AM
Wow looks like a winner Margaret. The best to you in the contest. Thank you for your always kind words on my writing. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 10/31/2011 6:51:00 AM
this is a really cute entry for the contest, I like it a lot :-)
Login to Reply
Date: 10/30/2011 11:00:00 PM
Lovely one to visualize.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/30/2011 10:25:00 PM
Very nice, margy. I need to hurry and do one of these. they are filling up fast!!
Login to Reply