Brian Strand Poet Verse

Notes About The Poem

THESE ARE OPEN(organic) VERSES using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretation unique to the moment

SITUATIONS-SURFACES

SITUATIONS
abandoned
in
disquiet
 intrusions
happening

awareness
paused
in
   isolated

 waves
of
polite
whispering
unpacked
displayed
  released
&
streamed

the
hassle
  interrupted
by
seasoned
calm
as rehearsed




SURFACES
idealised
simplified
   uninterrupted
fold
   inward
identically
shaped
with
desire

the
melancholy
lament
stimulates
  the
irreverent
twisted
& curled
rippled
disconnected
yet
discovered
scattered
in
silent
embrace
of the
invisible
stillness

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Joyce Faure November 10, 2023 at 6:05 AM Enjoyed your work thank you for posting