Caren Krutsinger Poet Rhyme

Sitting In the Sun Soaking Up Rays

I’m sitting in the sun, soaking up rays
This is one of those good old-fashioned days
Dog barks at tractor coming up the road
Cat fascinated by a small brown toad
The warm barely-breeze can hardly be felt
Dangling in the sun on end of God’s belt.

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Mahtab Bangalee April 8, 2019 at 6:07 AM it's a beautiful rhyme// love it Caren Krutsinger April 8, 2019 at 8:20 AM I love rhyming; it is what makes my heart laugh.

James Edward Lee Sr. April 7, 2019 at 4:35 PM All of the snow must be gone, now People and children coming outside now Tis the sign of springtime wow A wonderful time of year... An enchanting verse..Write On!! James Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 7:10 PM I am SO into SPRING; God's best season if you ask me!

Andrea Dietrich April 7, 2019 at 2:14 PM very COOL poem on a sunny day!! Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 7:10 PM This contrast delights me, Andrea.

Arturo Michael April 7, 2019 at 12:05 PM I like where you take me...the feeling I get...dangling in the sun on end of God's belt... Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 7:11 PM This is the feeling for sure, Arturo. A lazy, barely hanging on day.

Kim Rodrigues April 7, 2019 at 7:48 AM Ooh, love that last line and the thought of good old-fashioned days! Nice! Caren Krutsinger April 7, 2019 at 10:36 AM I am all about the sunshine; it is crazy how much I love it!