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Sitting In the Sun Soaking Up Rays

I’m sitting in the sun, soaking up rays This is one of those good old-fashioned days Dog barks at tractor coming up the road Cat fascinated by a small brown toad The warm barely-breeze can hardly be felt Dangling in the sun on end of God’s belt.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/8/2019 6:07:00 AM
it's a beautiful rhyme// love it
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/8/2019 8:20:00 AM
I love rhyming; it is what makes my heart laugh.
Date: 4/7/2019 4:35:00 PM
All of the snow must be gone, now People and children coming outside now Tis the sign of springtime wow A wonderful time of year... An enchanting verse..Write On!! James
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 7:10:00 PM
I am SO into SPRING; God's best season if you ask me!
Date: 4/7/2019 2:14:00 PM
very COOL poem on a sunny day!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 7:10:00 PM
This contrast delights me, Andrea.
Date: 4/7/2019 12:05:00 PM
I like where you take me...the feeling I get...dangling in the sun on end of God's belt...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 7:11:00 PM
This is the feeling for sure, Arturo. A lazy, barely hanging on day.
Date: 4/7/2019 7:48:00 AM
Ooh, love that last line and the thought of good old-fashioned days! Nice!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/7/2019 10:36:00 AM
I am all about the sunshine; it is crazy how much I love it!

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