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Sitting Duck

I see the perfect girl, yet I still refuse to accept the invitation The means to acquire her beauty would not reveal themselves the descending power did not fall down upon me Lack of time, prior attachments, and incompetence had left me a sitting duck now I sit... left with impertinent, inconsistent, wandering thoughts without the greatness of her impression or a quick return promising their reduction

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 6/17/2010 7:08:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family .. so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:24:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Holden. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2010 9:45:00 PM
There are times when some will miss the mark. The opportunity may only come but once. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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