Sitting, Chilling Out

Whilst sitting neath an old Gum tree
So many things I love to see

Watching Rabbits bounce around
And listening to those awesome sounds

Water trickling quite nearby
Black birds flying in the sky

Such lovely peace  it fills my heart
I sit here practicing my art

Writing poems is what I do
As I sit beneath the sky so blue

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Date: 3/20/2016 7:35:00 PM
Dear Vera I'm glad you liked my springtime poem, it's a cold spring here right now, it seems like the weather just can't make up it's mind or something. Four days of warmth then the temp drops down, so now we wait for the heat to come back. I was thinking of the real springs of my childhood, those were the days Vera, not like now hot, cold, hot cold. I miss those warm times, you can't even plant anything because you don't know what tomorrow will bring, cheri
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Date: 3/19/2016 12:48:00 PM
Dear Vera Another favorite piece, love the line about the bunnies, and the last line is exceptional, by the way I'm feeling better today I think the meds are working, at least I can breath this morning, love you guys and thanks for those great pics you sent I laughed and showed them to Thomas he love them two, take care you guys and hope this message finds both of you well in the land down under lol, cheri
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Vera Duggan
Date: 3/19/2016 8:00:00 PM
Yes cheryl just sitting and relaxing, mind you that is all we do all day now, but I love it, going to see the Titanic exhibition today with Lisa, so looking forward to it, take care my dear friend......Vera (Sis)
Date: 3/13/2016 5:14:00 PM
Dear Vera This is so relaxed, love the mood it gives the reader of a calming day just writing on a beautiful day, love it my friend totally, it's cold and wet here so this poem warmed me up thanks my dearest sister and friend, love you guys, take care always yours, cheri
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Date: 3/5/2016 5:05:00 PM
Glad i found this Vera, Gum tree sounds like Oz, love this poem, takes me right in there...
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Vera Duggan
Date: 3/8/2016 6:20:00 PM
Harry thank you so much for this lovely comment, yes it is Oz. Gum trees are native and they grow so big, I think nearly every garden has a gum tree, take care........Vera
Date: 2/24/2016 6:09:00 PM
Dear Vera We do have alot in common my sister, I use to be able to just sit still and listen, sometimes I close my eyes and remember. I miss those times, and I love the solitude of these images you put forth here, my dear girl, absolutely, wonderful piece. From what I've read from you and Peter's poems life there seems so much slower, a gentler pace. Where here everything goes at a faster pace, I'm just a country girl at heart, and miss that slower pace alot, cheri
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Vera Duggan
Date: 2/25/2016 7:05:00 PM
Ahhhhh! Cheryl my dear, wouldn't it be lovely if we could both sit together under an Old Gum Tree, with a cup of lemon Tea and have a good old chat, yes how wonderful and like you I am a country girl at heart, life can be pretty slow here at times but only because we live on the outskirts of Perth, take care my dear friend........Vera
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