Sitting Atop Time's Pumpkin Patch

You spend many years amid some crowd their world
Marking time about shadows ? Wanting, myself to react
Perhaps spin a loop or two and nucleus how they dig it when
We loose these bolts take another bite out of Jane as Joey's tune....
Knowing there is no veneer to this child albeit volatile his, multiplex flesh 
Ever transmitting, revulsive frequencies ? Rhinestone reflections colourless glass
Warped mirrors oblong shores; revolving doors phantom dreams ? In reveille.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/3/2014 3:13:00 AM
So much to ponder about in this poem John.Sorry I haven t been around so often to comment..but I had my father law in hospital suffering from angina..and is back to do a triple bypass on 26 th Marcg..Pls pray for our family.
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Date: 3/6/2014 6:37:00 PM
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Date: 3/6/2014 6:32:00 PM
.................."SOMEBODY, SAVE, THE QUEEN ';'(,* Mmmm, Sniff Sniff ... Down Bobby Down: Relax, Baby Boy '*,,*' Here, Give These Panty's ';'(,* Ok .... So, Where's Lou ? Grrrrrr, ';' He crawled inside a tubular boner, I mean bell ':' In the middle east or. Africa ? Come on Bobby, let's go get the prince, You check all the glistening boners for that's his mark *,* Eyes closed tight just suckling away..I heard he's a real gobbler Bobby '*,,*' Grrrrrrrrr, *,) '*.*'
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Date: 3/6/2014 6:25:00 PM
.........."SOMEBODY, SAVE, THE QUEEN ';'(,* Mmmm, Sniff Sniff ... Down Bobby Down: Relax, Baby Boy '*,,*' Here, Give Her These Panty's ';'(,* Ok .... So, Where's Lou ? Grrrrrr, ';' He crawled inside a tubular boner, I mean bell ':' In the middle east or. Africa ? Come on Bobby, let's go get the prince, You check all the glistening tubular steaks it doesn't matter the colours for, that's his mark *,* *,) '*.*'
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Date: 3/6/2014 6:21:00 PM
.........."SOMEBODY, SAVE, THE QUEEN ';'(,* Mmmm, Sniff Sniff ... Down Bobby Down: Relax, Baby Boy '*,,*' Here, Give Her These Panty's ';'(,* Ok .... So, Where's Lou ? Grrrrrr, ';' He crawled inside a tubular boner, I mean bell ':' In the middle east or. Africa ? Come on Bobby, let's go get the prince, You check all the glistening boners for that's his mark *,* *,) '*.*'
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Date: 3/6/2014 6:19:00 PM
.................."SOMEBODY, SAVE, THE QUEEN ';'(,* Mmmm, Sniff Sniff ... Down Bobby Down: Relax, Baby Boy '*,,*' Here, Give These Panty's ';'(,* Ok .... So, Where's Lou ? Grrrrrr, ';' He crawled inside a tubular boner, I mean bell ':' In the middle east or. Africa ? Come on Bobby, let's go get the prince, You check all the glistening boners for that's his mark *,* *,) '*.*'
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