Brenda Martin Poet Rhyme

Sittin Here Feelin Low

Sittin here feelin low
Wishin I didn’t miss you so
Tears fallin down my cheek
Lips trembling I cannot speak

What happened to the love we used to know
Why am I missin you so
Why did love go away
Why did your heart stray

Sittin here feelin low
Wishin I didn’t miss you so
Tears fallin down my cheek
Lips trembling I cannot speak

I try to get through another day
But lonliness just gets in the way
Tears fall every time I hear your name
Why did you play a cheatin game

Sittin here feelin low
Wishin I didn’t miss you so
Tears fallin down my cheek
Lips trembling I cannot speak

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Gordon Mcconnell May 28, 2016 at 1:35 PM Such a simple but splendid piece Brenda, such nice rhyme, really enjoyed it! Brenda Martin May 28, 2016 at 1:44 PM Gordon thanks for taking the time to read and post on my poem I really do appreciate it very much!

Seosamh De Burca May 28, 2016 at 8:13 AM Just read your featured poem congrats on many counts, great rhyming, couplets, flow a heartfelt piece. Well done. Brenda Martin May 28, 2016 at 1:44 PM thanks so much for taking time to read and comment I really appreciate it.

Keng Chuan Seng December 28, 2015 at 8:14 PM You have crafted a most beautiful poem.. Well expressed and rhymed most elegantly... Was such a pleasure to reread this poem.. Just to appreciate the flow of words within.. TQ for sharing such an exquisite write!!! Brenda Martin December 29, 2015 at 12:31 AM I'm so glad you got so much pleasure from reading my poem thank you for the very wonderful comment