Sisters

We've grown so much But never apart Best friends forever You're half of my heart You give me support You always understand Never stop reaching For my lost, helpless hand I've made some decisions That I'm sure you don't approve This world is utter chaos Don't lose me in a groove You're the light of my life The answer to my prayer A Sister's Sister What more could we share?

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/23/2013 6:35:00 AM

Good morning, Crystal congratulations with having your poem featured on the soups home page. Take care and enjoy the coming week. ~XOX~ *LIND

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2013 10:18:00 PM

Hi Crystal. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2013 3:52:00 AM

Crystal, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 12:07:00 PM

Crystal, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~

John Posey

Date: 5/24/2013 10:40:00 AM

I love the pure devotion and love used in crafting this tribute. The beauty of this work is that it could well apply to all siblings, uncles, aunts, cousins or any number of special relatives... Great job.... Jake