Sister

my feelings are hurt
all my hopes have been put down
but that don't matter



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dedicated to my sister who is under depression
i love you:-)

sistersenryu

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Walker Neese

April 30, 2009 at 11:19 AM

thanks raven u to

Lena Townsend

April 17, 2009 at 2:20 PM

A wonderful way to show your support for your sister. Your love shines on her and will help her through her darkest hours. Great writing, very touching. Peace, Love, and Light be with you and yours always. Smiles from Lolita

Arany P.

April 17, 2009 at 3:43 AM

i am very sorry .. your love and faith will get her through ... and she will get well! take care! ~ Arany

Carolyn Devonshire

April 16, 2009 at 1:57 PM

I'm sorry your sister is battling depression. She is lucky to have you. Your lovely poem reveals how much you care for her. She probably needs your support more now than ever before. Very thoughtful senryu, Raven!