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Sirens Chorale

What if I told you Deep in the abyss 
Was a watery haven where mermaids exist
Guarding treasures of pirates consumed by the sea
Residing in shipwrecks among the debris 
Maybe you have heard their harmonic chorale 
Through ocean’s Secret aquatic canals 
A Spellbinding symphony 
A treat for the ears 
But be well prepared 
it will move you to tears 
So next time you’re feeling the call of sea
Just know that the sirens are singing for thee

Copyright © Elaine Perrin | Year Posted 2019

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JCB Brul Date: 5/25/2020 7:45:00 AM Such a delicate poem from a kingdom deep down the sea. Lovely! Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/12/2019 12:15:00 PM Spooky love tale, so scary good, El! Your ink style is beautiful Ariel. As is this delightful poem. Love and best wishes for the holiday. Login to Reply Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 12/12/2019 12:18:00 PM Btw ... I wrote a tribute poem, "Electric Coma" that was inspired by your visionary poem, "Robot Revolution." I posted it on 11/19. Love and more love always.

Brenda Chiri Date: 10/28/2019 5:15:00 AM This has the perfect flow to it! It read in a sing song beat beautiful wow!;) Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 11/13/2019 5:58:00 AM Thank you lovely :-) x

Richard Lamoureux Date: 10/4/2019 11:10:00 PM I will be wary of the Siren call. Great imagery. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/6/2019 5:50:00 AM Thank you Richard :-) x

Arturo Michael Date: 10/2/2019 5:11:00 AM Enchanting to say the least...you've got the magic in your ink...Nice one Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/2/2019 8:55:00 AM Thank you for your lovely words Arturo :-) x

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 10/1/2019 3:54:00 PM This is one of my favs of the contest Elaine...wonderful imagery. Congrats. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/2/2019 3:42:00 AM So glad you enjoyed it :-) Thank you Jeanne x

Mark Peterson Date: 9/30/2019 9:24:00 PM You’ve spun a compelling little tale with smooth and apt rhyme and rhythm. I enjoyed it very much. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 10/2/2019 3:41:00 AM Thanks so much Mark :-) x

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/29/2019 4:46:00 PM Such beautiful tone and flow to your poem..enjoyed this lovely write, Elaine. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 9/29/2019 4:52:00 PM Thank you Vijay :-) x

Winged Warrior Date: 9/29/2019 12:11:00 PM Nicely executed my friend...and welcome to PoetrySoup...happy writing Elaine...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 9/29/2019 4:52:00 PM Thank you :-) x

John Gondolf Date: 9/29/2019 11:21:00 AM Elaine, I just saw that you are the number one top new poet of the last month, A big congrats my friend!!! John Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 9/29/2019 11:47:00 AM Wow! Thanks I didn’t know that :-) x

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/29/2019 7:26:00 AM Beautiful verse Elaine, you should enter the mermaids contest if you haven't already. Tom. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 9/29/2019 11:46:00 AM Thanks so much Tom :-) Yes I have entered x

John Gondolf Date: 9/29/2019 7:02:00 AM Those sirens of the deep are mesmerizing with their beauty and their song. Best of luck in the contest, Elaine. Join Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 9/29/2019 11:45:00 AM Thank you John :-) x

Silent One Date: 9/29/2019 5:14:00 AM Nice poem, how beautiful you make it sound.. Login to Reply Elaine Perrin Date: 9/29/2019 5:43:00 AM Thank you Silent one :-) x