Elaine Perrin Poet Rhyme

Sirens Chorale

What if I told you Deep in the abyss 
Was a watery haven where mermaids exist
Guarding treasures of pirates consumed by the sea
Residing in shipwrecks among the debris 
Maybe you have heard their harmonic chorale 
Through ocean’s Secret aquatic canals 
A Spellbinding symphony 
A treat for the ears 
But be well prepared 
it will move you to tears 
So next time you’re feeling the call of sea
Just know that the sirens are singing for thee

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JC Brul May 25, 2020 at 7:45 AM Such a delicate poem from a kingdom deep down the sea. Lovely!

Freddie Robinson Jr. December 12, 2019 at 12:15 PM Spooky love tale, so scary good, El! Your ink style is beautiful Ariel. As is this delightful poem. Love and best wishes for the holiday. Freddie Robinson Jr. December 12, 2019 at 12:18 PM Btw ... I wrote a tribute poem, "Electric Coma" that was inspired by your visionary poem, "Robot Revolution." I posted it on 11/19. Love and more love always.

Brenda Chiri October 28, 2019 at 5:15 AM This has the perfect flow to it! It read in a sing song beat beautiful wow!;) Elaine Perrin November 13, 2019 at 5:58 AM Thank you lovely :-) x

Richard Lamoureux October 4, 2019 at 11:10 PM I will be wary of the Siren call. Great imagery. Elaine Perrin October 6, 2019 at 5:50 AM Thank you Richard :-) x

Arturo Michael October 2, 2019 at 5:11 AM Enchanting to say the least...you've got the magic in your ink...Nice one Elaine Perrin October 2, 2019 at 8:55 AM Thank you for your lovely words Arturo :-) x

Jeanne Mcgee October 1, 2019 at 3:54 PM This is one of my favs of the contest Elaine...wonderful imagery. Congrats. Elaine Perrin October 2, 2019 at 3:42 AM So glad you enjoyed it :-) Thank you Jeanne x

Mark Peterson September 30, 2019 at 9:24 PM You’ve spun a compelling little tale with smooth and apt rhyme and rhythm. I enjoyed it very much. Elaine Perrin October 2, 2019 at 3:41 AM Thanks so much Mark :-) x

Vijay Pandit September 29, 2019 at 4:46 PM Such beautiful tone and flow to your poem..enjoyed this lovely write, Elaine. Elaine Perrin September 29, 2019 at 4:52 PM Thank you Vijay :-) x

Winged Warrior September 29, 2019 at 12:11 PM Nicely executed my friend...and welcome to PoetrySoup...happy writing Elaine...^WW^ :o) Elaine Perrin September 29, 2019 at 4:52 PM Thank you :-) x

John Gondolf September 29, 2019 at 11:21 AM Elaine, I just saw that you are the number one top new poet of the last month, A big congrats my friend!!! John Elaine Perrin September 29, 2019 at 11:47 AM Wow! Thanks I didn’t know that :-) x

Tom Cunningham September 29, 2019 at 7:26 AM Beautiful verse Elaine, you should enter the mermaids contest if you haven't already. Tom. Elaine Perrin September 29, 2019 at 11:46 AM Thanks so much Tom :-) Yes I have entered x

John Gondolf September 29, 2019 at 7:02 AM Those sirens of the deep are mesmerizing with their beauty and their song. Best of luck in the contest, Elaine. Join Elaine Perrin September 29, 2019 at 11:45 AM Thank you John :-) x

Silent One September 29, 2019 at 5:14 AM Nice poem, how beautiful you make it sound.. Elaine Perrin September 29, 2019 at 5:43 AM Thank you Silent one :-) x