Sinners

the sun shines on down
bringing the heat and sweating
like sinners in church
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 13, 2011 at 1:33 PM
nice haiku Jeremy, take care,..p.d.
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May 12, 2011 at 7:54 PM
Great comparison of heat to the sinners in the church. I really enjoyed this one, Jeremy
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