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Sinners

the sun shines on down bringing the heat and sweating like sinners in church

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/13/2011 1:33:00 PM
nice haiku Jeremy, take care,..p.d.
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:54:00 PM
Great comparison of heat to the sinners in the church. I really enjoyed this one, Jeremy
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