Sinking

As depression sinks in,
you ask whats wrong.
my mind floods with answers
all the wrong ones
my mind drowns in lies
all too dumb to say
my mind dies in confusion
too insane to untangle.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Curran Avatar
April 13, 2010 at 3:53 PM
this is so true..lovely..
Goff Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 7:30 PM
so true for so many, Keely... touches most families, mine in particular....well done, jimbo
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