Singsong of Spring-modern sijo

Hate is a feast for crows. Feast your eyes, instead, on love.
—by poet

Singsong of Spring

Caw of unseen crow and chorus
of potentially pretty wings.

Singsong may have interrupted
the murder - melody was sweet.

Tweeting torques communication;
hate fades with unflappable faith.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
April 20, 2025 at 9:04 PM
Simply a breath of fresh air, Kim. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2025 at 5:50 PM
Thank you, Paige!
Mckeithan Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 8:38 PM
Nice use of the form Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 24, 2025 at 5:50 PM
Thank you, Oliver!
Rolland Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 2:41 PM
lovely write, birds songs are love songs i guess, have a nice week end poet
Rodrigues Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 2:53 PM
Happy Weekend to you, dear Poet!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 1:46 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Love your great quote... "Good Luck" if for contest. Hope you have a great spring weekend writing away............
Rodrigues Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 1:52 PM
Thank you! A bit of rain and sun, but snow for the Northern folks. Happy Spring, dear Paula!
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