Single Mom

I’m a ‘tough little cookie’ when I have to be
Until this life gets the better of me
I can’t compete with the rest of you
So I’d appreciate it if ya didn’t ask me to
I’ve been holdin’ my own
And that there makes me proud
But my pat on the back
Got displaced in the crowd 
I need reassurance 
That I’m doing this right
Please tell me this struggle
Is well worth the fight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/6/2018 12:37:00 AM
'In your face' the tough cookie expresses herself, and the fluidity is amazing
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Date: 5/29/2018 3:16:00 AM
Hhmmm, you certainly sound like a "tough little cookie"! Very pleased to make your acquaintance, Gayle. My best regards! :) john P.s I agree -- there is nowhere quite like Scotland!
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Date: 9/24/2017 1:25:00 PM
Impressed by this flowing rhythmic poem and the single mom who wrote it! I'm sure you have worked wonders considering the financial and supportive limitations which you might have had to deal with. Keep up the good work! Regards // paul
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Date: 8/30/2017 5:17:00 AM
Life is worth any fight, Gayle:)
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Date: 7/28/2017 2:29:00 PM
Amways hard being a sinlge mum, but you see the rewards when they grow older... Well written Gayle..
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/28/2017 5:21:00 PM
Yeah it was not the life I'd anticipated, but we made it!
Date: 7/26/2017 2:53:00 PM
Chris summed it up nicely Gayle, we all question our purpose from time to time. Have a good day and keep smilin'.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/26/2017 9:12:00 PM
thank you Phil. :)
Date: 7/10/2017 3:18:00 PM
Life is a struggle at times, but as long as we try and do our bests when doing so, it is all worth it. It may not seem like it at the time, but time has a was of sneaking by, revealing the gold at the bottom of the mud (used for soup rules) pile. Besides, if this poem is any indication, it is definitely worth it.
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/10/2017 4:20:00 PM
Thx. I was just lickin' my wounds I guess ;)
Date: 7/10/2017 11:37:00 AM
Gayle, you are present! That is worth gold!
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Gayle Rodd
Date: 7/10/2017 4:21:00 PM
Thank you Kim. It's much better now
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