Eve Roper Poet Senryu

Sing Me a Senryu

stuck in a low blue

     bubbling with mock tearfulness-

          stealing wild thunder



          someone else could make

     a blue canvas of brightness-

          rhythmic wild impulse




9/2/2019

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Paul Callus September 3, 2019 at 9:47 AM Your choice of song is one that appeals to me, Eve...and your interpretation is superb. Hugs // paul

Chris Green September 3, 2019 at 7:36 AM These were great Eve. You really captured the essence and feel of the song. Best wishes in the contest

Franco Gonza September 3, 2019 at 4:33 AM Impressive senryu. I like Keith! Mail for you/