Sing

just a soft whisper
turns a heavy heart joyful
ancient hymns of praise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Very well penned. Excellent use of contrast from "soft" to "heavy." Your final line is an aptly expressed tie in. Congratulations! Brian
Feeley Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Thanks Brian, music has been a gift which I have gladly received since my childhood. Glad you liked it.
Wolf Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 6:49 PM
Nice touch! I agree. Here's to Joy and More Joy!
Feeley Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Amen and amen!
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