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Since Forever It Seems

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~Release~

For loving memory

she must depart

forever lovely

forever apart

My lilac of beauty

white satin dream

in solitude and rain drops

forever it seems

Since forever it seems, I saw my love go while endless from me are verses that flow My torrents of tears have rained pain’s release, but my love’s petal face in dreams brings me peace N/A Nov. 8, 2017 for 8-Line Poem 1-5 words per line-Use My Short Poem For Inspiration Or Add To It Contest (My title line was inspired by the last line of the model poem given please see 'about the poem' in the box above to view that poem)

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 6/16/2020 10:13:00 PM

Enjoyed this blast from the past. 'Solitude and raindrops', verse flows well, 'forever it seems'. -Richard

Sherese Gooden

Date: 6/16/2020 8:43:00 PM

Hi Andrea, That's my kind of poetry. Enjoyed the lyrics. Sherese

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/16/2020 11:12:00 AM

This poem was featured this week in the #1 position. Easy to see why. Just so poignantly penned, with a sweet ending two lines. Cheers, Andrea! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/16/2020 5:01:00 AM

superb poetic work; great pleasure to read

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/12/2018 4:14:00 PM

A lovely poem, Andrea.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 11/16/2017 3:22:00 AM

A gem of a beautiful poem, Andrea.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/12/2017 9:17:00 PM

It is a beautiful response, I love how it reads and I feel it is a gem, Andrea. Rick's prompt write is quite lovely, too. I've read and enjoyed your write 3 times, it is brevity perfection. Verse form is confusing to me, perhaps the most confusing of all! Love ya ... CayCay

Janice Canerdy

Date: 11/10/2017 8:08:00 PM

So lovely and bittersweet, Andrea! Janice

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2017 1:24:00 PM

I agree with Arthur, ditto what he said.;0)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/9/2017 11:46:00 PM

Andrea, this is a fav for me, I just found this so sweet and beautiful. Great poetry!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/9/2017 8:35:00 AM

Beautiful, Andrea, I am not even trying this one, you people have written such beauties already:)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/9/2017 6:36:00 AM

wonderful rhyme and fabulous flow. Best of luck in the contest.

John Gondolf

Date: 11/9/2017 5:36:00 AM

Very well done, Andrea, good luck in the contest. John

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/8/2017 9:02:00 PM

A deep sadness so beautifully expressed Andrea. 'my love's petal face' - lovely imagery. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!

Eve Roper

Date: 11/8/2017 8:25:00 PM

Nicely done :-) luck in the contest hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/8/2017 8:22:00 PM

As always, so lovely Andrea!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 11/8/2017 6:51:00 PM

I love the simplicity if the poem, it feels like an old song. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2017 5:49:00 PM

This is a perfect inspiration from Rick's write my friend! You have really gotten into the heart of Rick's poem and written a wonderful piece from that! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your delightfully wondrous poem Andrea! Great work!!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/8/2017 3:55:00 PM

Sentiments well expressed --best for a win, Andrea!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/8/2017 3:32:00 PM

aww this is so beautiful but sad Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx