Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Since Forever It Seems

Since forever it seems, I saw my love go
       while endless from me
                               are verses that flow

My torrents of tears have rained pain’s release,
       but my love’s petal face
                         in dreams brings me peace

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Quoth Theraven June 16, 2020 at 10:13 PM Enjoyed this blast from the past. 'Solitude and raindrops', verse flows well, 'forever it seems'. -Richard

Sherese Gooden June 16, 2020 at 8:43 PM Hi Andrea, That's my kind of poetry. Enjoyed the lyrics. Sherese

Gershon Wolf June 16, 2020 at 11:12 AM This poem was featured this week in the #1 position. Easy to see why. Just so poignantly penned, with a sweet ending two lines. Cheers, Andrea! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Mahtab Bangalee June 16, 2020 at 5:01 AM superb poetic work; great pleasure to read

Line Gauthier March 12, 2018 at 4:14 PM A lovely poem, Andrea.

Afzal Nusker November 16, 2017 at 3:22 AM A gem of a beautiful poem, Andrea.

CayCay Godwin November 12, 2017 at 9:17 PM It is a beautiful response, I love how it reads and I feel it is a gem, Andrea. Rick's prompt write is quite lovely, too. I've read and enjoyed your write 3 times, it is brevity perfection. Verse form is confusing to me, perhaps the most confusing of all! Love ya ... CayCay

Janice Canerdy November 10, 2017 at 8:08 PM So lovely and bittersweet, Andrea! Janice

Richard Lamoureux November 10, 2017 at 1:24 PM I agree with Arthur, ditto what he said.;0)

Arthur Vaso November 9, 2017 at 11:46 PM Andrea, this is a fav for me, I just found this so sweet and beautiful. Great poetry!

Joanna Daniel November 9, 2017 at 8:35 AM Beautiful, Andrea, I am not even trying this one, you people have written such beauties already:)

Scott Thirtyseven November 9, 2017 at 6:36 AM wonderful rhyme and fabulous flow. Best of luck in the contest.

John Gondolf November 9, 2017 at 5:36 AM Very well done, Andrea, good luck in the contest. John

Susan Ashley November 8, 2017 at 9:02 PM A deep sadness so beautifully expressed Andrea. 'my love's petal face' - lovely imagery. Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!

Eve Roper November 8, 2017 at 8:25 PM Nicely done :-) luck in the contest hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues November 8, 2017 at 8:22 PM As always, so lovely Andrea!

Agnes Krampe November 8, 2017 at 6:51 PM I love the simplicity if the poem, it feels like an old song. Good luck in the contest, Andrea.

Russell Sivey November 8, 2017 at 5:49 PM This is a perfect inspiration from Rick's write my friend! You have really gotten into the heart of Rick's poem and written a wonderful piece from that! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your delightfully wondrous poem Andrea! Great work!!

Vijay Pandit November 8, 2017 at 3:55 PM Sentiments well expressed --best for a win, Andrea!

Jan Allison November 8, 2017 at 3:32 PM aww this is so beautiful but sad Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx