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Simply Senryu: Dancing By Myself

Exhumed memories Pinned to a moment in time Faded photographs Close enough to hold Or lose one's way and drown in The past is like that Stripped of artifice The worst kind of nakedness One's own reflection Puerile litany Lust begets lust begets lust That's the thrill of it Dancing by myself Music slower softer now Box is winding down The music box plays The ballerina dances Graceful and alone

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Date: 12/15/2023 4:20:00 PM
Not your usual fare Jim, so serious! But well written collection of senryus
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 12/16/2023 10:15:00 AM
Thanks, Bill. Does me good to get out of my "comfort zone" now and then.
Date: 12/14/2023 1:12:00 PM
I hope you dont dance alone at the moment.. nice collection of senryu..
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 12/15/2023 10:39:00 AM
Thanks, S O...and I don't mind. At least I don't have to worry about who's going to "lead".
Date: 12/14/2023 12:43:00 PM
beautifully done, jim! i very much enjoyed...
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 12/15/2023 10:38:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene.

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