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Simply Put

Simply put- The day is almost over, The sun is finally setting- The darkness comes about. The darkness- Bringing with it Emotion beyond comprehension. Look up at the night sky- You will see a bright light Shining straight down on all of your deepest thoughts. The darkness Around it fights to cover up those thoughts Once more. The morning comes, You have made it through another night. Alive. Free. Hopeful.

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Date: 4/6/2011 8:33:00 PM
nice piece of writing.. Great job.
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Date: 4/6/2011 4:49:00 PM
Nice free verse- interplay of the metaphors of light and darkness, enjoyed it, Ashley
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