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Simply Put!!!

There is beauty in shadows...no light to show flaws....this is where the real you lives.

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Rick Parise

Date: 6/2/2010 4:07:00 PM

congrats on you placement Jim~~Very beautiful !!!~Rick

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2010 11:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest Jim. Love, Carol

Jim David

Date: 4/4/2010 3:36:00 PM

thanks, sara....i am an ignoramus in these matters.... i'm thinking my form is a hybrid/bastardized hiaku-Senryu kinda thingy.....thank you for the education!!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2010 3:26:00 PM

Great thoughts here in this write that could be a Senryu...Kinda a play on thoughts and words.. Sara

Rick Parise

Date: 4/4/2010 3:15:00 PM

could you dim the lights, possible a candle? nice R.Parise Salem oregon