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Simply Fond

You light the fire, in a world so cold. You fire the light in heart, that feels like gold. Strong in mind. Large in heart. Defined only by individuality. Ironic so it is. Defiant you are by nature. Imaginative of all thats surrounding. No shame in being influenced by you. Pure goodness. Pure enlightenment. Your presence is delicious. Eager pleas of craving sway my mind when you are absent. I surrender my mind to thoughts of you, favorite place in mind. Pure bliss, pure happiness, pure longing. Senses slowed, consumed completely of simple thoughts. I am somehow cleansed by purity. Seduced entirely by passion. Heart racing at images of you, anxious to be close. No doubts clouding vision, never far apart. Nothing has ever felt so intimate, while so out of reach. Love, such a persistent thing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/25/2010 3:29:00 PM
If I had someone who made me feel this way, I would be surrendering my thoughts too, Candice. Indeed, "Love" is a "persistent thing." Beautifully written. Thanks for your comments, I'm on vacation and have little computer access. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/23/2010 11:46:00 PM
Sounds like one awesome person you have written about! thanks for your comment to me today. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/23/2010 2:35:00 PM
Very creative Candice and reads like Free Verse.. if u can try to label each poem u post with a form to be more recognizable as to your own style.. if u don't know see under Resources.. Forms of Poetry ..the list is long and self explanatory.. to guide all us poets... enjoyed and appreciate your wonderful comments on my reads tonight.. happy weekend ..with luv..
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Date: 7/19/2010 6:04:00 PM
Wow, such a lovely and beautiful write, enjoyed....P.D.
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