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May we think back on simpler times:

fluid arc, gurgling of hose, giggling of little girls, with long hair. strawberry scent dizzies the air - suds are everywhere. waterfall rainbow rinses youths cinnamon strands, chubby cheeks jiggling. sunshine dries soaked hair as they continue to play in my fresh air memories. 3/16/2020

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Date: 5/3/2020 12:52:00 AM
Fresh, carefree, lovely poem. Simple pleasures are the most satisfying for adults too... Thank you ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2020 8:10:00 AM
Thank you, Shirley! I so agree!
Date: 3/19/2020 9:37:00 PM
Sweet memories of childhood....lovely! Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/19/2020 11:05:00 PM
Yes! Hugs. )
Date: 3/17/2020 3:37:00 PM
One of my FAVS of the week! I love everything about this one Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2020 7:06:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 3/16/2020 9:42:00 PM
Oh, so preciously penned -- esp. now that you-know-what is hard upon us. Bravo, Kim! :) Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2020 10:24:00 PM
I know! Crazy!
Date: 3/16/2020 2:57:00 PM
Hi Kim: A breezy approach to meditation!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2020 10:24:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/16/2020 2:49:00 PM
I have read that fresh air and sunshine kill virus's
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2020 10:26:00 PM
Hopefully!

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