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"simple Words"

For the time it takes a teardrop to reach the floor...
The words I love you could do so much more...

When hurt and pain can last for an eternity a times...
The simple words I'm sorry can change a set mind...

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Istzayana Salazar

Date: 10/25/2010 2:46:00 PM

beautifully written.... it so happens that i have also felt this way

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/17/2010 8:45:00 AM

Wish more people would realize how easy it is to say "I love you" and "I'm sorry," Michael. They may be simple words but it's difficult for some people to say them. Love your couplets, Carolyn

Kim Hilliker

Date: 10/16/2010 11:49:00 PM

Yep! Nice job, Michael.

Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 10/16/2010 11:14:00 PM

wow...what seemed simple is overlooked but actually when written is great...love that..^_^ v

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/16/2010 8:49:00 PM

Well Michael u have my vote on this write luv.. totally agree.. easier to say I luv u than cry a river over harsh words.. great piece my White Knight.. and how about them Yankees last night but what happened this afternoon luv??? Jersey Girl ..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2010 4:35:00 PM

Excellent ideas penned in these short lines...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/16/2010 3:36:00 PM

But how you speak those words will make a difference, I think

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/16/2010 1:09:00 PM

lovely, and true, a person can have that set mind, but those words can make a difference, enjoyed,..P.D.

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/16/2010 1:00:00 PM

"I love you " and "sorry" are sometimes the hardest to say but so much good can come from saying them.You have some great points in this beautiful poem Michael...take care~Deb