Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

"simple Words"

For the time it takes a teardrop to reach the floor...
The words I love you could do so much more...

When hurt and pain can last for an eternity a times...
The simple words I'm sorry can change a set mind...

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Istzayana Salazar October 25, 2010 at 2:46 PM beautifully written.... it so happens that i have also felt this way

Carolyn Devonshire October 17, 2010 at 8:45 AM Wish more people would realize how easy it is to say "I love you" and "I'm sorry," Michael. They may be simple words but it's difficult for some people to say them. Love your couplets, Carolyn

Kim Hilliker October 16, 2010 at 11:49 PM Yep! Nice job, Michael.

Juan Paolo Galua October 16, 2010 at 11:14 PM wow...what seemed simple is overlooked but actually when written is great...love that..^_^ v

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 16, 2010 at 8:49 PM Well Michael u have my vote on this write luv.. totally agree.. easier to say I luv u than cry a river over harsh words.. great piece my White Knight.. and how about them Yankees last night but what happened this afternoon luv??? Jersey Girl ..

Sara Kendrick October 16, 2010 at 4:35 PM Excellent ideas penned in these short lines...I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta October 16, 2010 at 3:36 PM But how you speak those words will make a difference, I think

Poet Destroyer A October 16, 2010 at 1:09 PM lovely, and true, a person can have that set mind, but those words can make a difference, enjoyed,..P.D.

Deb Wilson October 16, 2010 at 1:00 PM "I love you " and "sorry" are sometimes the hardest to say but so much good can come from saying them.You have some great points in this beautiful poem Michael...take care~Deb

Wilma Neels October 16, 2010 at 12:13 PM Sorry a simple word indeed. But it carry so much weight, like stated in this gem of yours Michael. Enjoy the football weekend. ;) love W

Francine Roberts October 16, 2010 at 6:58 AM so true, lovely poem Michael

Anthony Nutter October 16, 2010 at 6:36 AM Never let the sun set on your anger, excellent reminder how simple little word can change our whole attitude.