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Simple Specks of Sands

Simple specks of Sand… Force falls in love with Steam Gentle gazes through Glass… Blow breaths in life from Dream Utile uses into Urn… Gravity gives in cry for Lust Mantle mazes lay Mosaic…. Eroding ends return to Dust Simple specks of Sand…

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/8/2014 6:59:00 PM

Awesome verse. I'm so glad I got to read it today. "Eroding ends return to Dust" such impressive imagery throughout. Thanks for sharing! Always, Laura

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/2/2014 12:25:00 PM

I love the use of alliteration in your rhyming poem.Well done and Welcome to ps.Thanks for reading my poem :.)

Dennis Rarick
Date: 11/2/2014 4:48:00 PM

Thanks Charmaine, for showing the love, your the best :) Dennis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2014 5:51:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dennis - I choose your first very well written poem - I like it :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dennis Rarick
Date: 11/2/2014 7:24:00 AM

Thanks Anne for the welcome! I love reading everyone's poems.