Simple Specks of Sands

Simple specks of Sand…
Force falls in love with Steam
Gentle gazes through Glass…
Blow breaths in life from Dream
Utile uses into Urn…
Gravity gives in cry for Lust
Mantle mazes lay Mosaic….
Eroding ends return to Dust



Simple specks of Sand…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breidenthal Avatar
December 8, 2014 at 6:59 PM
Awesome verse. I'm so glad I got to read it today. "Eroding ends return to Dust" such impressive imagery throughout. Thanks for sharing! Always, Laura
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November 2, 2014 at 12:25 PM
I love the use of alliteration in your rhyming poem.Well done and Welcome to ps.Thanks for reading my poem :.)
Rarick Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 4:48 PM
Thanks Charmaine, for showing the love, your the best :) Dennis
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November 2, 2014 at 5:51 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dennis - I choose your first very well written poem - I like it :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Rarick Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Thanks Anne for the welcome! I love reading everyone's poems.
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