Simple Replies

Current mood: 
ashamed
You've broken my
borderline
I’d rewind but the
outcome is final
Pay my decaying fine
you've scratched me
like spinning vinyl.
And I simply reply
“I forgive you“

You've pushed me to
my past
So now I
procrastinate
openness
Because your
selfishness is
ruthless
And I simply don't
reply I take it.
 
You faked it I made
it
You’ve demolished
this
What the hell is
this?
Why not interrogate
You’re integrated in
my head
So I simply replied
and said
“I won't give up”

Believe in you?
Believing in what?
Change?
Or Challenge? I
don't know about
salvaging
I thought I had you
hook with love
talons
But no love talents
were shared
I’d start seeing me
seeing through you
to stuff
I chose and choose
not to believe
And I simply
reply... “I love
you”

So now he is not
only hurting me, I’m
hurting myself
I know these things
but I let them
continue
I knew these things
and I let him
continue
And I simply reply
I’m used to it.

I love you dammit, L
O V E
I thought I never
would I never wanted
to
Because of this fix
this!! Fix me
This love is hell
I fell
And so I replied.
“I’m done.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/11/2014 10:27:00 PM
THis Is Amazing! GOt a pointer for you. take it or leave it....Either way, the poem still ROCKS! I will send what I mean in private.
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