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Simple Life In The Past

Daddy worked the land To put food in our hand He worked in the mill To pay our monthly bills Lived to be 97 years old A simple life lived not so bold
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Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 9:02 PM
Coming back to America from a farm village in Israel, I knew more than a few like your dad -- every one of them an admirable person. I like and respect your tribute, Sara.
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 3:37 AM
Thank you, Gershon. I appreciate the information about how people do work in Israel. They have had to go to extra effort to get things to grow in that region because of lack of water. Sara K
Godwin Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 7:00 AM
My sweet Grannie was born Jan. 1900 and she lived one year longer than your Daddy (assuming this is true). I love this, even cling to this. I've always felt life in 1800s approx preferable to the 1900s for many reasons, and now with AI, it feels so even more profoundly. What is man going to be needed for? Anyway, I love the feel in your words just as I felt them. All the best and poetry hugs ... CayCay everywhere
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 8:05 AM
Thank you, CayCay, for the information and kind review. My father was 2 weeks shy of 97 years and my mother was one month shy of 97, but my mother's sister lived to be 98 years old. I think that the simpler times, and maybe even the work that they did help keep them healthier, but I don't know that. I went to my grandparents' grave this past weekend and they only live to be 82. So, I am not sure exactly what helped with the longevity. Sara K
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September 8, 2025 at 1:50 AM
- A simple life, but a hard life Sara - Lovely written :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 5:53 AM
Yes, Anne-Lise, it was simple, but the labor was long and hard. Life in some ways is so much easier today, but then in cities life issues out some ready hard facets of living that the older generation that lived and stayed at home never even though about. Thanks for the visit and understanding comments. Sara K
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September 7, 2025 at 6:04 PM
my dad too lead a simple life, Although not a bold life, he was courageous in spirit and actions. enjoy your evening, Sara K!
Kendrick Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 5:51 AM
Yes, Sara B., I read your poem about your father, and they were men to respect. My father had his faults, but so much about him was right as well. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
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September 7, 2025 at 8:42 AM
Sad in a way but heroic in many ways. Delightful couplet, dear Sara
Kendrick Avatar
September 7, 2025 at 1:53 PM
Victor, it wasn't easy back then. He lived on the wild side when he was young, but after they adopted me, he lived the best he could with the help of God, The son and the Holy Spirit. He worked hard and long hours. Thanks for the visit and understanding comments. Sara K
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