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the pencil moves smoothly gliding across the paper like a swan on a lake i try to keep the gray from smearing but it smears onto my barely tanned hands too if i look close enough to the white i can see the indents in the design but that is not what im paying attention to the little details must be perfect adding human characteristics to anime the girl that im creating looks to me her eyes full of hurt that wansnt my goal her mouth in a slight frown as if shes kind of scared am i accidently portraying myself here? as her features become more detailed as her body takes shape her story can be created in my mind her hair flows down to her shoulders bangs cut across and she seems to have a tear about to spill over the brim of her eye at least we arent twins but i have a feeling she shares a story similar to mine

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Date: 6/10/2009 2:51:00 AM
I love This,Boo.Such creativity!Your Really Rockin'-Ma'-Sox :p
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Date: 6/9/2009 3:19:00 PM
hot no doubt i can feel the emotion in this one
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