Silvery

gathering storm clouds
quenching relief from the heat
rainfall through my life
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Buhagiar Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 2:42 AM
Wish it were like that these last four days. We had a lengthy outage, and I was sweating profusely. Had to drink a lot.
Buehler Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 9:38 AM
I hate it when that happens! There's really not much to do when the lights go out, not to mention the uncomfortable heat. Glad it's behind you now.:)
Poet Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 8:52 AM
Deeply crafted haiku, with wonderful layers of imagery, Evelyn. Good luck with the contest.
Buehler Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 1:34 PM
Thank you for the kind thoughts and well wishes.
Smith  Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 5:08 AM
Nice haiku
Buehler Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 1:32 PM
Thank you very much, Alison.
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