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Silver Tailed Fox

*SILVER TAILED FOX*

silver tailed fox
running from silent trigger
trampled and fell---


~~~ 


the grasshopper
hops along the fern, 
with long legs---


by;p.d.

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James Nelson

Date: 4/10/2016 5:08:00 PM

Lovely Haiku. It brings to mind the cycle of life, death, and rebirth through death. Very thought inspiring.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2012 9:45:00 PM

stopping by on your silver tailed fox, to say hello, foxy PD! Thanks for your comments!

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/24/2011 9:15:00 PM

Nice animal poetry. Have a joyous holiday season. I am glad you liked my parody. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/19/2011 12:58:00 PM

Why didn't I see this? Why did I not comment on this? Probably was one of my down in the dump days. I loved your haiku P.D. I wish you would write more poetry and post it. I know you are busier then a hound scratching his butt these days. But do write more soon. Thank you for the comments you leave on my poems. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Linda. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/15/2011 5:30:00 AM

Hi Linda~I am crazy for haikus since all these haiku contests towards the end of this year. Thank u for honoring my poetry and sponsoring the Neopolitan Haiku contest. That was probably the highlight of my enthusiasm in poetry this entire yr! You brighten so many of the poets' days thru your writing and your encouraging contests. It gives everyone a shot at success...the 2 images in these haiku are great..the silent trigger and the long-legged grasshopper. Hope your bro-n-law is ok. Wishing u and your family well.

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 12/6/2011 11:36:00 AM

i have been away from theSoup for a spell! Thank you for all the dope ass comments! You rock. AND I am diggin' your Haiku display!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/3/2011 10:17:00 AM

Well written haiku pd. the soupers. Hmmmm may be our destiny for Idol or some reality show. Wishing you Nathon much happy times. (or he deals with me) lol. Just kidding. Enjoy your Saturday. Hug all day for you. Michael.

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/3/2011 7:52:00 AM

Beautiful haiku here! Have you ever read Basho? He is considered to be the master of haiku. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2011 9:56:00 PM

I also like a lot your ROMANTIC poems!!!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/2/2011 5:25:00 PM

ooh that first one shows a tragic picture for me, PD.....and the second one.... I just hope that hopper keeps hopping .. enjoyed and thanks for the placement.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/2/2011 4:44:00 PM

Good ones..Enjoyed reading this eve...Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2011 10:31:00 PM

Hey, Irma, how are you doing tonight? I'm going off here soon. Hope the day treated you well!

George Aul

Date: 12/1/2011 2:37:00 PM

Great pictures with your thoughts...thanks for the comments - smile back......George

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/1/2011 7:23:00 AM

love the imagery Pd, hope the day ahead will be a great one for you.. I am on my way home from work now :) tc Wilma

M.I.A .

Date: 11/30/2011 9:21:00 PM

ow, it fell! lovely haiku though, there's something about that silver tailed for me. the grasshopper part left me in wonders... it's like your emotion tried to leap somewhere(maybe just my feeling ;p). Wishing you a lovely day/night wherever you are, dear poet ^.~

Royal Trevino

Date: 11/30/2011 8:45:00 PM

Is that where you got your fur coat from~lmfao love you mom =(^.^)= Royal

Lisa Cooper

Date: 11/30/2011 6:08:00 PM

great haiku!

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/30/2011 4:23:00 PM

Lovely Haiku's Poet. Thank you for my win in your First Love Poem Contest. I love all your contests. I wish I could enter every single one but time is not my friend.

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/30/2011 1:42:00 PM

Wishing you all the best with this P D,, a smooth write..

Jack Horne

Date: 11/30/2011 12:46:00 PM

Lovely haiku, PD. The first one was very sad. Hope you're having a great week : )

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/30/2011 12:03:00 PM

* "Psss. * I Saw Your Beauties Favourite Poets * Kudos & Champagne Toast All The Way Around * My Luv, Forever * Sarah." *

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/30/2011 11:59:00 AM

Fantastic one enjoyed. Funny write. Thanks for sharing, bl

Daver Austin

Date: 11/30/2011 11:35:00 AM

I especially like the second Haiku. No. I really love it. Love, daver

Tim B

Date: 11/30/2011 11:04:00 AM

Nice imagery, these could be read a variety of ways and imply some deeper philosophical meaning. Nothing wrong with it simply being a fox and a grasshopper though, just a lively jaunt through nature. Excellent.