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Silver Tailed Fox

*SILVER TAILED FOX*

silver tailed fox
running from silent trigger
trampled and fell---


~~~ 


the grasshopper
hops along the fern, 
with long legs---


by;p.d.

Copyright © Poet Destroyer A | Year Posted 2011

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James Nelson Date: 4/10/2016 5:08:00 PM Lovely Haiku. It brings to mind the cycle of life, death, and rebirth through death. Very thought inspiring. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2012 9:45:00 PM stopping by on your silver tailed fox, to say hello, foxy PD! Thanks for your comments! Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 12/24/2011 9:15:00 PM Nice animal poetry. Have a joyous holiday season. I am glad you liked my parody. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/19/2011 12:58:00 PM Why didn't I see this? Why did I not comment on this? Probably was one of my down in the dump days. I loved your haiku P.D. I wish you would write more poetry and post it. I know you are busier then a hound scratching his butt these days. But do write more soon. Thank you for the comments you leave on my poems. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Linda. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 12/15/2011 5:30:00 AM Hi Linda~I am crazy for haikus since all these haiku contests towards the end of this year. Thank u for honoring my poetry and sponsoring the Neopolitan Haiku contest. That was probably the highlight of my enthusiasm in poetry this entire yr! You brighten so many of the poets' days thru your writing and your encouraging contests. It gives everyone a shot at success...the 2 images in these haiku are great..the silent trigger and the long-legged grasshopper. Hope your bro-n-law is ok. Wishing u and your family well. Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 12/6/2011 11:36:00 AM i have been away from theSoup for a spell! Thank you for all the dope ass comments! You rock. AND I am diggin' your Haiku display! Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 12/3/2011 10:17:00 AM Well written haiku pd. the soupers. Hmmmm may be our destiny for Idol or some reality show. Wishing you Nathon much happy times. (or he deals with me) lol. Just kidding. Enjoy your Saturday. Hug all day for you. Michael. Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 12/3/2011 7:52:00 AM Beautiful haiku here! Have you ever read Basho? He is considered to be the master of haiku. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/2/2011 9:56:00 PM I also like a lot your ROMANTIC poems!!! Login to Reply

Robert A. Dufresne Date: 12/2/2011 5:25:00 PM ooh that first one shows a tragic picture for me, PD.....and the second one.... I just hope that hopper keeps hopping .. enjoyed and thanks for the placement. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/2/2011 4:44:00 PM Good ones..Enjoyed reading this eve...Sara Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/1/2011 10:31:00 PM Hey, Irma, how are you doing tonight? I'm going off here soon. Hope the day treated you well! Login to Reply

George Aul Date: 12/1/2011 2:37:00 PM Great pictures with your thoughts...thanks for the comments - smile back......George Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 12/1/2011 7:23:00 AM love the imagery Pd, hope the day ahead will be a great one for you.. I am on my way home from work now :) tc Wilma Login to Reply

M.I.A . Date: 11/30/2011 9:21:00 PM ow, it fell! lovely haiku though, there's something about that silver tailed for me. the grasshopper part left me in wonders... it's like your emotion tried to leap somewhere(maybe just my feeling ;p). Wishing you a lovely day/night wherever you are, dear poet ^.~ Login to Reply

Royal Trevino Date: 11/30/2011 8:45:00 PM Is that where you got your fur coat from~lmfao love you mom =(^.^)= Royal Login to Reply

Lisa Cooper Date: 11/30/2011 6:08:00 PM great haiku! Login to Reply

Broken Butterfly Date: 11/30/2011 4:23:00 PM Lovely Haiku's Poet. Thank you for my win in your First Love Poem Contest. I love all your contests. I wish I could enter every single one but time is not my friend. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 11/30/2011 1:42:00 PM Wishing you all the best with this P D,, a smooth write.. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 11/30/2011 12:46:00 PM Lovely haiku, PD. The first one was very sad. Hope you're having a great week : ) Login to Reply

Sarah Seraphin Date: 11/30/2011 12:03:00 PM * "Psss. * I Saw Your Beauties Favourite Poets * Kudos & Champagne Toast All The Way Around * My Luv, Forever * Sarah." * Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 11/30/2011 11:59:00 AM Fantastic one enjoyed. Funny write. Thanks for sharing, bl Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 11/30/2011 11:35:00 AM I especially like the second Haiku. No. I really love it. Love, daver Login to Reply

Tim B Date: 11/30/2011 11:04:00 AM Nice imagery, these could be read a variety of ways and imply some deeper philosophical meaning. Nothing wrong with it simply being a fox and a grasshopper though, just a lively jaunt through nature. Excellent. Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 11/30/2011 10:18:00 AM Great haiku PD. Just read that you are engaged to Nathan so I missed that news somewhere. Congrats to you both. love phyl Login to Reply

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