Silver Stars

water waltz in wind
silver stars splash sway spray squirt
flying flamingo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Misra Avatar
October 13, 2020 at 9:17 PM
Beautiful imagery. Every word conjured up a picture. And all those pictures beautifully composed into masterpiece. Loved the poem, Rama. Thank you for it.
Balasubramanian Avatar
October 14, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Thanks. At times when others praise you feel your poem is indeed good. Thanks for your positive comment. It made my day. Take care, warm regards Rama
Deepa Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 2:18 AM
Wow..amazing Haiku..I enjoyed it :-) Loved the fying flamingo.. Congratulations on your win.. Keep writing and keep shining.. Take care.With love~Deepa:-)
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 4:02 AM
Thanks Deepa. I appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Take care. Warm regards, Rama
Dutta Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 9:24 AM
WOW! I admire Congrats to win. Blessing
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 10:56 AM
Thanks Anisha. I appreciate your taking time out to congratulate me. Take care. Warm regards, Rama
Kitchin Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 6:49 AM
Rama, congratulations on your winning placement, a great haiku with great alliterations and the last line is a vivid surprise!
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 27, 2020 at 10:54 AM
Thanks for the placement. Enjoyed creating it. Take care. Warm regards, Rama
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