Maclawrence Famuyiwa Poet Haiku

Silver snowflakes Haiku

silver
           snowflakes s h i n e

                    s h o w i n g
        seasonal secrets

slumbers 
           stayed somber




Contest: YOUR CHOICE X
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Contest Judged: April 30th, 2025 7:39:00 AM
Placement: Honourable Mention

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Eve Roper January 16, 2025 at 7:58 PM Maclawrence, great imagery and feel of this alteration in Haiku form. Maclawrence Famuyiwa January 17, 2025 at 5:19 AM Thanks. I really appreciate your comment.

Abdullah Alhemaidy January 13, 2025 at 3:34 PM Salute! Maclawrence Famuyiwa January 13, 2025 at 5:28 PM Thanks.