Silver Moon

The moon was so enchanting
Silver shimmering
The sea held up its mirror.

1.1.2021.
Hi-Ku(5) Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 7:19 AM
delightful ~
Mitra Avatar
March 28, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Thank you Line...much appreciated :)
Ashley Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 9:54 AM
The beauty of your imagery enchants my imagination easily, Carol. I adore your haiku and admire your last line greatly. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Mitra Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 2:34 AM
Thanks dear Susan....missed this comment....much appreciated....sorry for a late revert.
Mitra Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 2:34 AM
Thanks dear Susan....missed this comment....much appreciated....sorry for a late revert.
Mitra Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 1:58 AM
Thanks dear Susan....missed this comment....much appreciated....sorry for a late revert.
Fenn Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Beautiful!
Mitra Avatar
January 4, 2021 at 8:57 PM
Thank you dear Jennifer :)
Koplin Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 9:57 AM
Congratulations on your win Carol!
Mitra Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thanks dear Mark...Happy New Year :)
Allison Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 9:43 AM
an absolute gem! Many congrats:-) Happy new year:-) hugs jan xx
Mitra Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Thanks dear Jan....Happy New Year wishes right back :)
Kauffman Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 9:39 AM
Wonderfully creative, Carol. Love the moon and the mirror images! Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year to you!
Mitra Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Thanks dear Sam....Happy New Year wishes back to you :)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 6:38 AM
Congratulations, Carol, on your fabulous win. It's a stunning haiku! A Happy New Year To You ~ Mala
Mitra Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 1:59 AM
Thanks dear Mala...sorry for a late revert....much appreciated.
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 5:39 AM
Wow. Congratulations. Wishing you a blessed year ahead.
Mitra Avatar
January 2, 2021 at 5:41 AM
Thanks Rama....Happy New Year to you too :)
Agustin Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 5:49 AM
Thanks for this. God bless you with a great 2021 all by His grace.
Mitra Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Thanks dear Beata....Same to you, wish you an awesome 2021 too :)
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