Silver Lining Jewels

Blue sweetly Jack frosted fingers
bite down deep inside trembles
Grasping claws on frozen air
each touch gently breathing 
out a cloud of the softest
Silken satin holding you 
In each and every single breath 
A soul kissing beauty in song sings
I go weak at the knees in honor
flying dreams dancing with the spirits 
Together we have found Heaven
Just in that one kiss honey
I will rock you forever gently
always holding you sweetheart close
embracing the heart within 
these open arms smiling dew
falling love frozen precious pearls

8/7/7/7/7/7 heaven rising 8 cloud 9/9/9 falling to 8 heaven 7/7 landing 8 dreaming waves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Hamilton Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 5:17 AM
great pen Liam love the imagery mate hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
November 12, 2014 at 11:40 AM
thank you linda dear pal wonderful comment bless you
Hicks Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 2:53 PM
Never has Jack frosted fingers been described as sweet - very interesting!! I believe the best parts were the beginning and the end - I liked the winter images.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 3:12 PM
smiling timothy you think i should of added a hint of snow to sparkle the frost ha ha wonderful comment dear pal got me thinking thank you kindly bless you
Trifiatis Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 11:04 AM
For me a 7/7/7/7/7/7/7/7/7 it is, dear Liam! A pearl necklace of feelings!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 11:58 AM
dazzling pearl stringed heavenly comment dear pal bless you heartfelt appreciated demetrios
Petersen Potter Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 11:39 PM
Such a glowing and amazing canvas of love and beauty you've painted here in this masterpiece, my dear friend Liam. Just awesome! I just love it! beautiful picture of love and beauty. A 7 for you! Love and hugs! xxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:16 AM
thank you dorian deeply for the truly dazzling beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Lindley Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 8:47 PM
And a gem it is my friend. Are you by chance writing this to a special lady? Sure is a miss opportunity if not my friend... Solid 7 from me and let your pen stay busy!
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:12 AM
smiling you hit the nail on the head robert dear pal someone special thank you so kindly heartfelt appreciated bless you
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 5:59 PM
Ah, such a beautiful gently written poem Liam. So full of love. Beautiful.
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 1:06 AM
ah thank you brenda so true what you say dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
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