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Silver Lining Jewels

Blue sweetly Jack frosted fingers bite down deep inside trembles Grasping claws on frozen air each touch gently breathing out a cloud of the softest Silken satin holding you In each and every single breath A soul kissing beauty in song sings I go weak at the knees in honor flying dreams dancing with the spirits Together we have found Heaven Just in that one kiss honey I will rock you forever gently always holding you sweetheart close embracing the heart within these open arms smiling dew falling love frozen precious pearls 8/7/7/7/7/7 heaven rising 8 cloud 9/9/9 falling to 8 heaven 7/7 landing 8 dreaming waves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/12/2014 5:17:00 AM
great pen Liam love the imagery mate hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/12/2014 11:40:00 AM
thank you linda dear pal wonderful comment bless you
Date: 11/10/2014 2:53:00 PM
Never has Jack frosted fingers been described as sweet - very interesting!! I believe the best parts were the beginning and the end - I liked the winter images.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 3:12:00 PM
smiling timothy you think i should of added a hint of snow to sparkle the frost ha ha wonderful comment dear pal got me thinking thank you kindly bless you
Date: 11/10/2014 11:04:00 AM
For me a 7/7/7/7/7/7/7/7/7 it is, dear Liam! A pearl necklace of feelings!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 11:58:00 AM
dazzling pearl stringed heavenly comment dear pal bless you heartfelt appreciated demetrios
Date: 11/9/2014 11:39:00 PM
Such a glowing and amazing canvas of love and beauty you've painted here in this masterpiece, my dear friend Liam. Just awesome! I just love it! beautiful picture of love and beauty. A 7 for you! Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 1:16:00 AM
thank you dorian deeply for the truly dazzling beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/9/2014 8:47:00 PM
And a gem it is my friend. Are you by chance writing this to a special lady? Sure is a miss opportunity if not my friend... Solid 7 from me and let your pen stay busy!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 1:12:00 AM
smiling you hit the nail on the head robert dear pal someone special thank you so kindly heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 11/9/2014 5:59:00 PM
Ah, such a beautiful gently written poem Liam. So full of love. Beautiful.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/10/2014 1:06:00 AM
ah thank you brenda so true what you say dear friend wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated

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