Noel Onat Poet Haiku

Silver Flakes

silver flakes-
virgin clear
rap on pines

gleaming mild
like white  beams-
angel wings

as snow drifts
kids’ eyes roll
till they sleep



Charlieku 3-3-3, A Charles Messina Contest
Dec 27, 2018

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Sara Kendrick January 3, 2019 at 4:12 PM Creative way to go with your winning work. I enjoyed reading this one today. Congrats. Sara

Nette Onclaud January 2, 2019 at 9:16 AM so soothing, noel.. congrats on your award!..huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2019 at 11:56 PM - Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Noel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina January 1, 2019 at 3:40 PM Wonderful poetry, Noel. Great imagery and beautifully written. Congratulations on your placement in my contest...Happy New Year...Charlie

Heidi Sands December 27, 2018 at 6:46 PM So beautiful! Very nice writing :)