Silver Beams

silver beams dancing
gently casting deep shadows
that seduce senses

icy waters plunge
steeply down into the lake 
forming long ripples
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 3:15 PM
I really like how you painted the picture. The last one especially. Very descriptive, Shadow.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 9:21 AM
I enjoyed your morning inspiration. Have a great day Shadow.
Nance Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 6:11 PM
Mm pretty images :)
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