Silver and Gold

Lollipops and lemon drops loll lazy on the tongue From ten silver fillings ~ gold 'new words' are sprung '

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Date: 8/6/2021 2:59:00 PM

Glad my teeth can't speak they would be telling me off for the sweet things I sometimes eat. Emilia : )

Date: 8/4/2021 5:28:00 AM

I cringed as I read this; I think you have peeked into my mouth.

Date: 8/3/2021 3:45:00 PM

We used to call those lollipops “suckers” My grands can keep those lazy pops lolling for quite a while.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2021 5:35:00 PM

Love…love your comment!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2021 3:47:00 PM

I was a sucker for all-day suckers, as I recall... Still am. ~ W.C. Fields says there's one of me born every minute! ~ Help! Succor!

Date: 8/2/2021 11:31:00 PM

Let's hope this poor soul's got good dental insurance! Good one G.W.! Shalom...ab

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2021 3:46:00 PM

He's on the silver and gold plan. He's got silver, but the dentist wants gold. lol. Thanks, Anselmo. :) gw

Date: 8/2/2021 8:33:00 PM

Oh, I think I know what you mean. Anymore I must be very careful what I eat for fear I'll require more dental work.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/3/2021 3:46:00 PM

An apple a day keeps your dentist paid, apparently. ~ Lowly Worm