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Silky Sweet Sighs

Taking in all the beauty of this sunny brand new day As squirrels scurry about, caught up in their play Watching brilliant colors blend together up in the skies A soft gentle breeze whispers Good Morning in silky sweet sighs

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2019 7:22:00 PM

short and sweet. Love it!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 8:08:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea!;)

John Fleming

Date: 9/15/2019 6:35:00 AM

Pleasant and cheery little ditty, Brenda...puts me in mind of Autumn that is now firmly upon us. Lots of affection. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:43:00 PM

Ahh hank you John! I think your too nice to me!;) all my affection!;)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/15/2019 2:52:00 AM

Goodmorning:) Maybe you can hear my sweet sighs across the ocean, Brenda! This delightful poem is an ideal starter to the new day! Warm regards // paul

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/15/2019 5:43:00 PM

Of course I can Paul!;) thank you my dear friend I do love your visits!;)

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/13/2019 7:35:00 PM

i love mornings, the sunrises, and sounds within...especially in the warmer months, beautiful my friend!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/14/2019 12:20:00 AM

Then we shall!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/13/2019 8:40:00 PM

why not, collaborations and word twisting can be fun sometimes...

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/13/2019 7:42:00 PM

Ahh Sandy thank you but I think your beautiful words would make this poem pop! So think ya might want to add to it?;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2019 6:10:00 PM

I think that Chris Green has some 'competition' -- You! … I'm going to rephrase that: Chris has a collaborator!! (We want to work together here, not compete). Wonderful, Brenda! :) gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/14/2019 9:22:00 PM

I've read this again, and it's just as wonderful as the first time. That increases its stature... As for my 'brilliance,' I'll have to tell my wife to wear sunglasses around the house. LOL. Thank you for your poetry and for your encouragement, Brenda, and good luck with the collab. Blessings, gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/13/2019 7:41:00 PM

Ahh Gershon I think you just had a brilliant idea! A collab yes that sounds wonderful and I believe I have just the person who could do that! Thank you my friend! Not only are you witty but brilliant too!;)

Bobby May

Date: 9/13/2019 3:14:00 PM

Brenda, what a silky sweet thought lol, your mind wonders like mine sometimes they blend which is scary!! LOL Love Ya my Friend!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/13/2019 3:25:00 PM

Lmao! Very scared huh Bobby! Haha! Ah well great minds and all! Thanks for stopping by!;)

John Lawless

Date: 9/13/2019 3:08:00 PM

Hey, you been looking out my window.....very nice Brenda...My l'il grandson and I named the squirrel "SCOOT"....

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/13/2019 3:24:00 PM

Haha that's cute John!Scoot huh! When my son was little he use to call squirrels "skeezers" lol! But yea I could tell some stories about squirrels! Lol thank so much for stopping by !;)

Chris Green

Date: 9/13/2019 1:46:00 PM

See!!!!!! Beautiful, soft, sweet and how every morning should be. All you need to do is add "Good Morning Soupers" to the bottom and this and it will be perfect. :)

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/13/2019 2:33:00 PM

Hahaha! You are the original "Good Morning Soupers" poet not me Chris! Lmao! You are about silly! Plus none would read mine if I did (which I'm not) haha! So I take it you liked it!;)