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Contest: Visions of a Vignette-2

Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

Verse Poetry form only

Date: 23-06-2025

                                                  What is
        
                                               benevolence?

                                              A poor cocoon
                                    
                                      peels off his fine silk coat

                                        and gifts it to a tycoon

                                               Be graceful.

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2025 5:47:00 PM

fearless write with quiet sense of irony or sarcasm... we now have animal rights, patri...sunny congrats on your top win in my contest ...and thanks!

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/27/2025 12:13:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2025 1:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K

Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 6/27/2025 12:13:00 AM

Thank you so much for the compliments.