Sotto Poet Poet Verse

Silkworm

Written: June 21, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

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slow loop
small super slug
forms few fluid
dropping lustrous slime trail,
snails are my escorts' spirits
shelter shell--

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Howard Kerr June 27, 2025 at 12:41 AM Congratulations Sotto on your selection with immaculate imagery embedded in a plausible narrative and the requisite nuanced last line Howard

Nette Onclaud June 26, 2025 at 5:32 PM ohh a stylized, romanticized side of a silkworm. very creative, sotto...cheers on your win in my contest!

Sara Kendrick June 25, 2025 at 1:59 PM Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen June 24, 2025 at 10:06 AM - So much exciting in nature ... a short time ago I also wrote about the silkworm ... best wishes in the contest with your great poem, Las :) - hugs

Joseph May June 22, 2025 at 3:58 PM Aleays leaving a shine, Nicely penned Sotto

sara Etgen-Baker June 21, 2025 at 4:25 PM perfect entry for the contest--most creative. Made me smile :-) yellow rose best wishes with this contest entry

Paige Hind June 21, 2025 at 11:41 AM A very deep look into the shell- :)