Silkworm

Written: June 21, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud ************* slow loop small super slug forms few fluid dropping lustrous slime trail, snails are my escorts' spirits shelter shell--

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Howard Kerr

Date: 6/27/2025 12:41:00 AM

Congratulations Sotto on your selection with immaculate imagery embedded in a plausible narrative and the requisite nuanced last line Howard

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2025 5:32:00 PM

ohh a stylized, romanticized side of a silkworm. very creative, sotto...cheers on your win in my contest!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2025 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning work in this contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your work with us. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/24/2025 10:06:00 AM

- So much exciting in nature ... a short time ago I also wrote about the silkworm ... best wishes in the contest with your great poem, Las :) - hugs

Joseph May

Date: 6/22/2025 3:58:00 PM

Aleays leaving a shine, Nicely penned Sotto

Sara Baker

Date: 6/21/2025 4:25:00 PM

perfect entry for the contest--most creative. Made me smile :-) yellow rose best wishes with this contest entry

Paige Hind

Date: 6/21/2025 11:41:00 AM

A very deep look into the shell- :)