Silk Road

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Witten for eight word challenge

Silken Impetus Opulence Mockery

Adorn Chasm Exult Vicarious

Silk Road

S      Syncretic in nature Mohamed ties silken faith
                    
I       Into punk rock's impetus and shouts from the mountain
          
L       Leaves opulence behind and returns to the basics

K      Kaleidoscope in hand he rejects the mockery of un-reflected belief


R      Razor blades adorn his face from ear to listening ear

O      Overcome the chasm of splits and dogmatic restraint

A      Allude and exult in cleansing incision

D      Doomed no more by vicarious mainstream he sounds out the road


03rd September 2018

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/4/2018 9:05:00 PM

Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Kai, extraordinary creativity and articulation in this piece - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 9/5/2018 4:36:00 AM

Thank you Gregory. I seem to be very lucky with John's contest. I make very last minute entries and get rewarded. So many wishes to you as well, Kai