Silk Eyelids

silk eyelids flutter

as her pale petals wither---

bare grieving thorns weep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Duffin Avatar
January 3, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Hi . You must have the third eye. This is sad. Eamon
Muzzey Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 6:04 PM
Wonderful Haiku, I enjoyed the read, very descriptive. Welcome to poetry soup. Caryl
Dietrich Avatar
January 1, 2011 at 12:57 PM
This is a great personification of a flower, Eiken!
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