Silhouettes of the Night

After sun's radiant light Night's silhouettes dance swiftly Shadows 'pon cobbled side walk Dark recesses do enclose Moonlight's trickling beams circle Little boy's shadow does grow Deep thoughts~soon he'll be that tall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
November 10, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Excellent, Sara! Love the imagery and the climax that comes along with the final two lines. Well done! // paul
Horne Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:36 PM
awww, love this sweet one, my friend
Meade Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 2:20 PM
I really like this one . . . dancing shadows and growing boys -- shadows hinting at what's to come. great job Sara.
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 1:50 PM
Oh Sara this is beautifully penned you should submit it my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Inspired by Nette's contest but not an entry..Sara
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