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Silhouettes of the Night

After sun's radiant light Night's silhouettes dance swiftly Shadows 'pon cobbled side walk Dark recesses do enclose Moonlight's trickling beams circle Little boy's shadow does grow Deep thoughts~soon he'll be that tall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/10/2014 10:14:00 AM
Excellent, Sara! Love the imagery and the climax that comes along with the final two lines. Well done! // paul
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Date: 11/9/2014 2:36:00 PM
awww, love this sweet one, my friend
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Date: 11/9/2014 2:20:00 PM
I really like this one . . . dancing shadows and growing boys -- shadows hinting at what's to come. great job Sara.
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Date: 11/9/2014 1:50:00 PM
Oh Sara this is beautifully penned you should submit it my friend:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2014 1:47:00 PM
Inspired by Nette's contest but not an entry..Sara
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