Silhouette

silhouette 

loss is a shadow unseen in the sun ~ projected through a loved one


Bite Size Poem no50 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
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08/05/22

allusionlost loveremembermonoku

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Jennifer Proxenos

August 15, 2022 at 11:10 AM

A thought provoking write, serious sentiments that perplex you, a time to reflect and perhaps a time to understand a heartfelt loss, sad but cleverly depicted David my friend, a deep penetrating sense of loss.. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, Jennifer

David Kavanagh

August 15, 2022 at 1:53 PM

Thank you Jennifer, The empty space left by a loved one is impossible to fill, their shadow is always inside of us, even when the sun shines, but it’s not always apparent to others, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

August 14, 2022 at 4:28 PM

Beautifully Sad Sir Dark , Light

David Kavanagh

August 15, 2022 at 2:25 AM

Thank you Christopher, so many grieving people clasp at shadows or indeed anything that might reflect a loved one, life indeed can be inexplicable and sad beyond belief, cheers David

Komal Walimbe

August 9, 2022 at 2:21 AM

Pensive thought right here...Nicely written!)

David Kavanagh

August 9, 2022 at 5:45 AM

A moment of deep reflection Komal, thank you so much for stopping by, cheers David

Terry Flood

August 5, 2022 at 5:00 PM

Deep sentiment, David, nicely written. Good luck in Line’s contest. Terry

David Kavanagh

August 6, 2022 at 12:50 AM

Thank’s Terry, I’m in the shade of late with my poems, so trying to refocus myself with monokus, this one is probably a reflection of how I feel, I’m missing my muse, cheers David