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Silently Melting

Ice frosting over
Glazed glacier moving inching
Melting in darkness

emotionsmoving ontimehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

June 11, 2013 at 9:25 PM

Hello Tim, it was nice seeing you stop by my work today. Thank you. about your haiku: Unexpected events change in the place were they stand. Uncontrollable power in the movement of energy moving it visible ways in the darkness. love the haiku...................... LINDA

Nette Onclaud

June 4, 2013 at 4:25 PM

wonderful icing on 'ku lines, tim... nice to read you again ... this melts my senses..:) huggs!

Karen Anglesey

May 25, 2013 at 2:28 PM

Moving, inching, melting...sounds like the effects of global warming ... Very descriptive and the melting in darkness is daunting...nice poem !

Sara Kendrick

May 25, 2013 at 9:46 AM

A tongue twister that you have penned in this wonderful work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visit..Sara

Russell Sivey

May 24, 2013 at 2:51 PM

This is a masterpiece by you Tim! You have impressed me with this glorious poem my friend! I really loved reading this awesome write this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, such an amazing poem, Great Work!!