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Silently Melting

Ice frosting over Glazed glacier moving inching Melting in darkness

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/11/2013 9:25:00 PM

Hello Tim, it was nice seeing you stop by my work today. Thank you. about your haiku: Unexpected events change in the place were they stand. Uncontrollable power in the movement of energy moving it visible ways in the darkness. love the haiku...................... LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/4/2013 4:25:00 PM

wonderful icing on 'ku lines, tim... nice to read you again ... this melts my senses..:) huggs!

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/25/2013 2:28:00 PM

Moving, inching, melting...sounds like the effects of global warming ... Very descriptive and the melting in darkness is daunting...nice poem !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/25/2013 9:46:00 AM

A tongue twister that you have penned in this wonderful work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for your visit..Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/24/2013 2:51:00 PM

This is a masterpiece by you Tim! You have impressed me with this glorious poem my friend! I really loved reading this awesome write this afternoon! What a fantastic piece, such an amazing poem, Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/24/2013 12:54:00 PM

- Good one, Tim. - - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)