Silent Whisper

Moving and flowing with life,
fear somwhere inside,
listening to silent guide
embracing a twilight.

Problems are inevitable
helpers nowhere
yet there is a hope
silent whispers has said

I wish to fly high
like all humans- look alike
destiny to put aside
all miseries to hide

Silent whisper has promised
to rescue from pain
reach a coomon path
of love and no disdain...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 24, 2010 at 5:16 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sneha. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Nandy Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:22 PM
SNEHA , YOUR "SILENT WHISPERS" - SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS ! WELCOME TO THIS SITE , -Raj
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August 23, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Dear Sneha: Great poem. Have a fantastic day. Sheol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 12:26 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more.. with luv..
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August 23, 2010 at 11:37 AM
Sneha, a deep poem almost sounds like a movie and a dream, enjoyed,..p.d.
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