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Silent Suicide

Silent Suicide A world with out love is one not for me Only in my dreams I'm truly happy but sleep just no longer comes to me now thoughts won't leave my mind for some reason wow. How do we all get through every day? Is this God's plan or the Devil's sick play. That now dreams of me dying bring me joy cause leaving behind this life would be joy. A world with out love is one not for me only in my dreams I'm truly happy So Lord forgive a son for how I lied, and save me from a silent suicide... Rose

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Jon Arno

Date: 1/27/2012 6:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning entry. Good job. Best regards, Jon

Caleb Schmitt
Date: 1/28/2012 8:20:00 PM

Much appreciated!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2012 6:07:00 PM

a silent suicide, so heartbreaking, Caleb. congratulations for your win with this well delivered poem

Caleb Schmitt
Date: 1/26/2012 9:07:00 AM

Thank you it means a lot to hear something like that

Bob Quigley

Date: 1/25/2012 9:50:00 AM

You must know that you are never truly alone. There is someone out there that looks for you. Hearts forever seek.

Caleb Schmitt
Date: 1/26/2012 9:08:00 AM

I agree and disagree one is alone till the hearts finally meet, thank you for the advice

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2012 6:02:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Caleb. Love, Carol

Caleb Schmitt
Date: 1/26/2012 9:08:00 AM

Thanks Carol means a lot I didnt think this poem would win or be good

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/22/2012 9:40:00 PM

Hey Caleb, don't ever give up! There is love in this world or we wouldn't be here. The loneliness you feel will go away if you pray and believe...In the company of his friends, at the time he needed a friend the most, Jesus was alone..totally alone! He felt loneliness..he knows how it feels so go talk to him...find a quiet place and empty yourself..I wish you all the best and will be praying for you too. Have a good week. Love, Annalise

Caleb Schmitt
Date: 1/26/2012 9:09:00 AM

POint well taken, thank you for giving some hope hope you have a splendid week as well