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Silent Sitting

Sat in silence Ill malfeasance Lingering softly Eerily' aloft he Never did know Carefree and slow Eerie always lasts Evanescenced ephemerally Never fitting inwardly Died today So please pray ~The silence engulfed another victim, in the forest the tree heard him fall.

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/10/2012 7:13:00 AM

I can almost see the spirit lifting from the body in this Tim; You use some beautiful words for the transformation!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/8/2012 12:39:00 PM

hey, tim.. glad to have parked here... eerie yet powerful write... you are trending!..:)huggs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/7/2012 11:15:00 PM

Hi TIM..stopping by to say hi!! Hi!!.. have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2012 6:14:00 PM

Enjoyed the penned lines..I am not sure if you are refering to one dying a natural death or if refering to dying emotionally..Question...Thanks for the kind review of my work about quiet..Your comments were so uplifting..Sara

Tim B
Date: 4/9/2012 11:53:00 AM

I try to let the reader determine, but you are spot on that it could be seen as either. In this case, I think your second line of thought is accurate. I always find your poems and comments uplifting as well, thanks Sara.

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/3/2012 10:30:00 PM

Wow that surly is a deep poem my friend! I rather loved this write a lot! Awesome Work!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/3/2012 9:03:00 PM

Tim, a very deep request... thank you for sharing.. always..pd