Tim B Poet Acrostic

Silent Sitting

Sat in silence
Ill malfeasance
Lingering softly
Eerily' aloft he
Never did know
Carefree and slow
Eerie always lasts

Evanescenced ephemerally
Never fitting inwardly
Died today
So please pray




~The silence engulfed another victim, in the forest the tree heard him fall.

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Elizabeth Wesley April 10, 2012 at 7:13 AM I can almost see the spirit lifting from the body in this Tim; You use some beautiful words for the transformation!

Nette Onclaud April 8, 2012 at 12:39 PM hey, tim.. glad to have parked here... eerie yet powerful write... you are trending!..:)huggs!

Poet Destroyer A April 7, 2012 at 11:15 PM Hi TIM..stopping by to say hi!! Hi!!.. have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD

Sara Kendrick April 7, 2012 at 6:14 PM Enjoyed the penned lines..I am not sure if you are refering to one dying a natural death or if refering to dying emotionally..Question...Thanks for the kind review of my work about quiet..Your comments were so uplifting..Sara Tim B April 9, 2012 at 11:53 AM I try to let the reader determine, but you are spot on that it could be seen as either. In this case, I think your second line of thought is accurate. I always find your poems and comments uplifting as well, thanks Sara.

Russell Sivey April 3, 2012 at 10:30 PM Wow that surly is a deep poem my friend! I rather loved this write a lot! Awesome Work!!

Poet Destroyer A April 3, 2012 at 9:03 PM Tim, a very deep request... thank you for sharing.. always..pd