Silent Pond

Stagnant reflections,
Manifest on the surface:
Still tranquility.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/12/2010 4:26:00 PM
Another amazing write Raul and like Doris we are beginning a three day rain event expecting 6 inches or more before weekend is over... enjoying the tranquility of your last line..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/12/2010 1:15:00 PM
Is it raining in the midwest? It is flooding in Ga!! the earth worms are drowning on the drive.
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Date: 3/12/2010 10:37:00 AM
Good afternoon Raul. So wonderful to see your post today. I can see the picture you have painted here with your words. I do enjoy reading your poetry it is exceptional. Please have a wonderful weekend . May you find joy happiness and an over abundance of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/11/2010 5:44:00 PM
Yes....utter stillness...not a breath of air...I can see it! Well done, Raul! ~ Carrie
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Date: 3/11/2010 5:39:00 PM
Well this one is an ambiguous write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/11/2010 4:07:00 PM
So much said in just three lines. I like the way the last line ties into the title. I found myself reading this over and over reflecting on your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen
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Date: 3/11/2010 3:02:00 PM
Silence.. Serenity and Reflection..beautiful..glad you're posting-Charma
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Date: 3/11/2010 2:41:00 PM
Raul~As always a beautiful masterpiece! Laura :)
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