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Silent Pond

Stagnant reflections,
Manifest on the surface:
Still tranquility.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 12, 2010 at 4:26 PM

Another amazing write Raul and like Doris we are beginning a three day rain event expecting 6 inches or more before weekend is over... enjoying the tranquility of your last line..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Doris Culverhouse

March 12, 2010 at 1:15 PM

Is it raining in the midwest? It is flooding in Ga!! the earth worms are drowning on the drive.

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 12, 2010 at 10:37 AM

Good afternoon Raul. So wonderful to see your post today. I can see the picture you have painted here with your words. I do enjoy reading your poetry it is exceptional. Please have a wonderful weekend . May you find joy happiness and an over abundance of inspiration. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

March 11, 2010 at 5:44 PM

Yes....utter stillness...not a breath of air...I can see it! Well done, Raul! ~ Carrie

Sara Kendrick

March 11, 2010 at 5:39 PM

Well this one is an ambiguous write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

March 11, 2010 at 4:07 PM

So much said in just three lines. I like the way the last line ties into the title. I found myself reading this over and over reflecting on your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen