Silent One Poem Comment

Unattributable Praise In your silence, there’s expression in the ripples of your verse, and veiled comments cast chagrin (or light) across words/rhymes diverse. You aren’t here to trim our sails with ink or taunt us from blank page. It’s one reason why fish like your bait. The spice you add is sage. (1) You think death’s a net that’s cast for us! Has Nothing chance to win? Say death’s door! Can one egress from life, or does life pull us in? Mock your silence, a fool’s freedom from real friendship! That saves face? Let us hear muse! Sing it bravely! Mock fear’s death dance! Live God’s Grace! Krakatoa Kritic #007 April 27, 2021 A poetic commentary on a poem called "Dancing With Death" by the 'Silent One' on PoetrySoup.com. 1. Sage is a spice known for its ability to enhance the flavor of what is already present without imparting its own unique flavor.